her name was Vanessa she had a mom and dad that loved her so so so much she would come back from school all happy she would have dinner take a shower and spend time with her family for bought and hour or two and she would go to bed so a couple weeks later her mom droped her of at school had a fun day and on her walk home she saw this guy that was goth so she walked faster and faster the guy cought her and took her.parents came to school and wanted to now if she went home so they said yes after that they went to the police station and asked were is my daughter they did not now so the police put up sighns saying lost child 5 years old 3 feet tall and has black hair name vanessa last name vagara.everyone the next morning got there news paper and saw that there was a lost little girl...And a girl read the news paper and saw here she goes to here school and saw who took her.her mom and her went to there house and told here how he looked like she said he had...black all on him blond and black hair with white shoes while she was saying that the mom was drawing a picture of him and they went to the police station and they found him they saw the little gurl and she was in a chair with ropes all around her they unrapted her and took her home wile the police took they kidnapper to jail..i wort this by myself with no help.
grooviest
I highly doubt you are 16, you have no sence of grammar, puncuation, or spelling.
If you are going to lie about your age try a little harder.
115 years, 10 months & 19 days ago 30th Dec 2008 19:44
you meen ABOUT
115 years, 11 months & 21 days ago 29th Nov 2008 13:16
ya well im 16 so i already know how to spell and im in 11th grade o dont know what ur talking abought
116 years, 1 month & 18 days ago 2nd Oct 2008 16:36
not really sad, and not good grammer, but you're getting the basics of writing
116 years, 1 month & 18 days ago 1st Oct 2008 20:41
how bought u shutup
116 years, 1 month & 25 days ago 24th Sep 2008 19:48
not that sad. just weird
116 years, 1 month & 25 days ago 24th Sep 2008 18:41